Oh my dear baby, my baby.♥

Favorite Eclipse movie quotes.

Written at Wednesday, June 30, 2010 | back to top

Hello bloggers! How's your day? I always ask that question. Lol. Mine was totally great! You know why? It is because I had the chance to watch The Twilight Saga : Eclipse on its first showing day even though there are so many people. As in, many. I super duper extra mega loved the movie! I like it more than New Moon. But, I guess Breaking Dawn would even be better if it will be shown. Maybe it would be next year? Let's all hope. I love this movie because some of the scenes were a little bit funny. When Edward and Jacob are fighting (small fights) for Bella, they are so cute. They always tease each other. It shows that both of them really do love Bella. Oh, how I wish I was Bella. Two hunks are fighting over her. Lol. I'm also glad the werewolves and vampires are now getting along, because they need to fight the clan of Victoria, and luckily, they won over Victoria. Victoria is now dead, yeah! Haha. I also loved the way Jacob fights for Bella. I also love the movie quotes, I'll share you some of my oh-so-favorite quotes. :)

"Let's face it, I'm hotter than you." - Jacob Black to Edward Cullen.

"I'm gonna fight for you until your heart stops beating." - Jacob Black to Bella Swan.

"I don't hate you. I don't particularly like you, but.. Bella, I envy you." - Rosalie Cullen to Bella Swan.

"You wouldn't have to change for me, Bella. I'm inlove with you and I want you to pick me instead of him." Jacob Black to Bella Swan.

"You have to consider the idea that I might be better for her than you are." - Jacob Black to Edward Cullen.

"I can give you more than him." - Jacob Black to Bella Swan.

"You'll always be my Bella." - Edward Cullen to Bella Swan.

"I'll protect you, no matter what." Edward Cullen to Bella Swan.

"I know the consequences of this choice you're making. I've lived through it, and to let you suffer that. You believe I have a soul, and I don't, but to risk yours, just for the sake of never having to lose you, is the most selfish thing I'll ever do." - Edward Cullen to Bella Swan.

"Isabella Swan, I promise to love you every moment of forever." - Edward Cullen to Bella Swan.

"I don't wanna lose you!" Bella Swan to Jacob Black.

"Why are you so against me becoming like you?" - Bella Swan to Edward Cullen.

"She's still human. Volturi don't give second chances." - Jane to Edward Cullen.

"You're different with him. He moves, you move. Like magnets. I just wanna make sure you're making the right choices for you." - Renée Swan to Bella Swan.

Signing off,
Jam.
10:18 PM.
Philippine Time.

Excited for Eclipse.

Written at Tuesday, June 29, 2010 | back to top

Good evening bloggers. How's your day? Mine was happy, sad and boring. I exactly don't know why my heart aches so badly. It's like I'm not in the mood and I can't breathe. Err, I'm sure you know this kind of feeling. Btw, always smile right? Forget all the problems. :D Okay, so I'm really excited for the showing of Eclipse tomorrow (June 30, 2010). Actually, I want to watch at the premiere night but due to some problems, I didn't have the chance. My mom is excited too. Very much. Okay, so I will just tell you what happened tomorrow. I'm really sleepy now, I'm so sorry. Goodbye! :)

Signing off,

Jam. :)

11:20 PM

Philippine Time.

I'll be running as one of the officers.

Written at Tuesday, June 22, 2010 | back to top

Hello bloggers. How's your day? Mine was totally great. Guess why? Secret. Private matter. =)) JK. But I wouldn't really tell why. Change topic. Uhmm, yeah, I'll just talk about what happened on the start of my Sophomore year. Yeah, until now, even though it is already our third week in school, I still can't believe I am studying for this long. And now, I'm already a Sophomore. 2 years more and I'll be on college. Okay, back to topic. On my first day of being a Sophomore student. At first, when I woke up in the morning, I'm so nervous because I know I have a new set of classmates which are really not my friends. 'I really miss my old section and I want my old classmates back' That's on my mind when I woke up in the morning until I went to school. When I first stepped inside my school, I immediately saw Jeff, Aezrile and Richelle waving at me. Sigh. I thought my friends are not yet there because it's very early. Fortunately, they are early birds. :P And then, we talked a lot about our Summer experiences. Then, one by one, my friends came. I'm really happy to see them again. Especially Pamella. She's a comeback student. She stayed at ICAM on her Elementary days and then when she was on First year high school, she studied at UST. Luckily, she will study on ICAM again for her Sophomore year. When I heard about the news of her coming back to ICAM again, I was so shock and at the same time, so happy. I really can't explain the feeling I'm having that time. It's because when we were still on Grade 6, we are classmates. While we are having our graduation practices, we were always sitting besideeach other that's why we became so close and we both share the same interests too and that made us click together just like magnets.=)) And until now, every breaks, I'm always going with her and wereally talked about a lot of things. LOL. Pammy, I mentioned you here because I love you so much. Ayieee. :"> Okay, back to my first day. And then after the bell has rang, we immediately went to our respective lines. I belong to Year 2 - Justice and then I immediately saw Vanessa. We became close since First Year high and I am so happy I'm classmates with her. Yay! And then we went up. Too bad, our classroom just have one door that's why it is so damn hot. Err. My adviser let us sit first on where we want to so I sat besideVanessa. I observed my classmates, some of them are my close friend and old classmates that's why my nervousness lessen. And then my adviser was a new teacher in ICAM. She introduced herself to us. Her name is Ms.Agana. She's quite strict but she's really kind. And then, uhmm. We just discussed about grading systems, rules and regulations, requirements and so on and so forth. And then last period came, our adviser asked us to do an activity. We need to draw a symbol that symbolizes our own personality in an oslo paper. I drew a 'Paper and Ballpen.' Wonder what reason did I placed there? Hmm, let's just say I just love writing stories that's why I draw that symbol. And then after school, my barkada and I ate Isaw and walked around the school. That's how my first day ends. Pretty boring, huh? :)) Oh, wonder what is the picture above this post all about? I'm just sharing to you guys my recommendation letter for my club, Peer Counseling Group. I will run as the Auditor on that club since I was an active member since last year, my moderator asked me to run as one of the officers. At first, I want to decline the offer but then I come to think of it and finally I agreed. We need to pass recommendation letters that are signed by our parents, class adviser, subject teacher and the prefect of discipline. Tomorrow is the election and I'm really nervous.Wish me luck. I hope I'll win as the auditor. Okay, what a long post. Buh-bye bloggers. Need to sleep. Byieee. Love you all. :-h :D >:D<

Signing off,

Jam.

9:38 PM.

Philippine Time.

Review for my fanfic : Driven By Love.

Written at Monday, June 21, 2010 | back to top

Title: Driven By Love.♥
Author: moonstaro3 andberrychild.
Reviewer: th1rd3ye

Title: 4/5
Lovely title, in my opinion, and I want to say that the poster was a fabulous one. Do thank your designer (though this is not part of the judging criteria). However, such a title may easily get lost in a full Winglin list of titles appearing on the page, since many titles use the word “Love”.

Forewords: 6.5/10
The foreword is pretty short, which is not intriguing enough. There is a brief summary and two significant quotes which are meaningful. However, I will like to know more about the settings and background of the characters (both major and minor). If there were a third party, include his or her significant quote too. Do include more basic information. Strive on.

Plot: 9.5/15
Such a dramatic love plot is rather typical and too common, with scenes overused in dramas. I recalled that the drama of Meteor Garden having the poor girls asking the Famous F4 to help them sell their stuff. I think you should add more twists and developments of your own. Try harder!

Creativity/Originality: 6/10
Same comment as plot since the plot you used would reveal your creativity and originality.

Flow (speed): 12/15
The flow is alright, but I find the falling in love part with each other, too rapid. I think you can gradually show the progress in change of feelings towards each other, especially with rather many other minor characters around. Try to include more expressions and reactions from both the main and minor characters.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 10/15
Grammar is a little weak. Changes in tenses are abrupt at times. Vocabulary used is rather simple and easy to comprehend. Your usage of prepositions is weak. I think you can improve in that aspect. Do strive on. Examples of errors include:

[1] She founds him irritating. (Foreword) – Since you have been using present tense rather consistently in the foreword, I think you should stick to it. It should be “She finds him irritating.”

[2] What did she just said?! (Chapter 1) – It should be “What did she just say?!”

[3] We’re the only one who’s been left on the room. (Chapter 1) – It should be “We’re the only ones who are left in the room.” The “We” is plural. Also, the preposition “on” is misused.

[4] No. Realy. (Chapter 1) – This is either a typo or real spelling error. It should be “Really.”

[5] Gui Gui shouted on me. (Chapter 2) – Gui Gui shouted at me.

[6] The girls who are following me shouted. (Chapter 3) – I think the abrupt change in tenses is a little out of place. You used “are” and then the following verb is “shouted”. I think you should stick to present tense, since from your foreword; you had been using present tense rather consistently.

[7] But, in one condition. (Chapter 4) – It should be “But, on one condition.”

[8] My first impression on him was just not good. (Chapter 5) – It should be “… impression of him …”

[9] B-but, maybe when I confessed, everything will changed. (Chapter 12) – After modals such as “will” and “would” and “might” and others, the following verb should be in its root form. So it should be “… everything will change.”

Writing Style: 8/10
I like your writing style. It is neat and easy to comprehend. The changes in points of views are clear. The sentences and paragraphing are tidy and appropriate. The only thing is about the lack of specific and descriptive descriptions of details and settings which can help enhance the imagery of your story. Characters will be livelier and more realistic with vivid descriptions.

Characterization: 7/10
As I have mentioned under Writing Style, there seemed to be an apparent lack of descriptions on the characters’ actions (you can be a little exaggerating since the scenes can be quite dramatic at times with a really famous teen idol), as well as the tones and emotions of characters. You can try to search for more sophisticated speech verbs which portray different tones and help to highlight the characters’ feelings. You can add in more actions to show more of the characters’ personalities. Dialogues are sufficient.

Setting/Details: 5/10
The settings and details are not that elaborate as mentioned above. Do try harder for this aspect.

Subtotal: 68/100

Bonus: 5/5
=D Sorry for the long wait.

Total: 73/100

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Hello there. Long time no blog, eh? :)) I missed you blogspot. I'm so sorry I can't update everday due to my tight schedule in school. I'm only a Sophomore in High School and yet so many school works need to be finished. Are they torturing us? :| So, change topic. Okay, what I posted above here is the review for my 2nd story also known as, fanfic. I've requested this long time ago and yet it only came out this time. I'm really excited to read it. I know I have so many mistakes in my story but there's always a room for improvement right?

Maybe someday, we never know, I'll be a book author. Lol. For now, that's my dream. since I have a passion for writing stories so on my college, maybe I would take Script Writing. Hehe. I talked too much. I'll update tomorrow guys. All about Sophomore year. I'll talk about it tomorrow because I'm really damn sleepy now. Goodbye everyone and I love you. Good night! :-*

Signing off,

Jam. :D

9:47 PM.

Philippine Time.

100 Truths About Jam Serrano.

Written at Friday, June 18, 2010 | back to top

WHAT WAS YOUR:

1. Last beverage = Iced Tea.

2. Last phone call = Daddy.

3. Last text message = From Casey.

4. Last song you listened to = Shuo Ni Ai Wo – S.H.E.

5. Last time you cried = This week, I don’t remember the exact date.

HAVE YOU EVER:

6. Dated someone twice = Nope.

7. Been cheated on = Hmmm? :))

8. Kissed someone & regretted it = Never kissed someone.

9. Lost someone special = …

10. Been depressed = Yes.

11. Been drunk and threw up = Nope.

FIRST THREE FAVORITE COLOURS:

12. Pink.

13. Sky Blue.

14. Lavender.

THIS YEAR HAVE YOU: (2010)

15. Made a new friend = Yes.

16. Fallen out of love = Yes.

17. Laughed until you cried = Of course.

18. Met someone who changed you = Yup.

19. Found out who your true friends were = Yup.

20. Found out someone was talking about you = YES.

21. Kissed anyone on your friend's list = IDK. =))

22. How many people on your friends list do you know in real life = Close friends.

23. How many kids do you want to have = Still don’t think about things like that. :P

24. Do you have any pets = Nope.

25. Do you want to change your name? = I’m okay with it.

26. What did you do for your last birthday = Shopping with my dear friends.

27. What time did you wake up today = 9 AM. I didn’t go to school today.

28. What were you doing at midnight last night?= Laptop.

29. Name something you CANNOT wait for = To watch the musical play, Flow.

30. Last time you saw your Mother = Awhile ago.

31. What is one thing you wish you could change about your life? = Many to mention.

32. What are you listening to right now = Taiwan Pop Songs, as usual. :P

33. Have you ever talked to a person named Tom = Nope but I have a friend who’s idol is Tom Kaulitz and I always call her Tom. =))

34. What's getting on your nerves right now = School. =))

35. Most visited webpage = Facebook, Winglin & Plurk.

36. Whats your name = Jaymee Ann Melissa Cruz Serrano.

37. Nicknames: Jam, Jammy, Ja.

38. Relationship Status = It’s complicated. Very.

39. Zodiac sign = Taurus.

40. Male or female? = Female.

41. Primary School = Immaculate Conception Academy of Manila.

42. Middle School = Same with my Primary school. Been studying there for like 9 year of my life. =))

43.Colleges = I’m still on High School.

44. Hair colour = Black and brown? =))

45. Long or short = Shorty.

46.Perfume (current) = Hype Perfumes.

47. Do you have a crush on someone? = Totally.

48: What do you like about yourself? = I love me. Especially my eyes. =))

49. Piercings = Ears.

50. Tattoos = None.

51. Righty or lefty = Righty.

FIRSTS :

52. First surgery = When I injured my knee and it is needed to be stitch. It took a whooping 4 stitches! :(

53. First piercing = When I was still young.

54. First best friend = I don’t really remember, actually.

55. First sport you joined = Volleyball.

56. First vacation = Can’t remember.

59. Eating = None.

60. Drinking = None.

61. I'm about to = Sleep.

62. Listening to = Taiwanese Songs.

63. Waiting for = A miracle.

YOUR FUTURE :

64. Want kids? more than one? = IDK.

65. Want to get Married? = Hmm?

66. Career? = Book author, Fashion Designer.

WHICH IS BETTER :

67. Lips or eyes = Eyes.

68. Hugs or kisses = Both.

69. Shorter or taller = Taller.

70. Older or Younger = Older or Same age.

71. Romantic or spontaneous = Romantic.

72. smart or good face = Both.

73. Sensitive or loud = None. =))

74. Hook-up or relationship = Relationship.

75. Trouble maker or hesitant = Hesitant.

HAVE YOU EVER :

76. Kissed a stranger = Nope.

77. Drank hard liquor= Nope.

78. Lost glasses/contacts = Many times. :(

79. Sex on first date = WHAT A QUESTION. OF COURSE NOT!

80. Broken someone's heart = Yeah..

81. Had your own heart broken = I guess.

82. Been arrested = Nope.

83. Turned someone down = Awhile ago.

84. Cried when someone died = Of course.

85. Fallen for a friend? = A big YES.

DO YOU BELIEVE IN:

86. Yourself = Yes.

87. Miracles = Sometimes.

88. Love at first sight = Crush only.

89. Heaven = Yes.

90. Santa Claus = Nope.

91. Kiss on the first date = Nope.

92. Angels = Sometimes.

ANSWER TRUTHFULLY:

94. Had more than 1 girlfriend/boyfriend at a time = Nope. I’m not a two-timer.

95. Did you sing today? = Yes.

96. Ever cheated on somebody? = Nope.

97. If you could go back in time, how far would you go? = Year 2009.

98. If you could pick a day from last year and relive it, what would it be? = July -- ? :|

99. Are you afraid of falling in love? = Sometimes.

100. Posting this as 100 truths? = Yes.